Story Starter, Feedback Please.
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Story Starter, Feedback Please.
The sound of my sneakers slapping the blacktop, heavy panting coming from my mouth, fear and dread covering me like a blanket. Knowing I would not escape my pursuer, dreading my inevitable capture.