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My Novel

Unread postPosted: Tue May 26, 2020 3:31 am
by Tesgri
So I've been writing a full length novel since 2017, since being stuck at home all the time now I've had a lot more free time to work on it and I've made significant progress. I would like to share some of it and get feedback from the community however the issue is that, being a novel, it is lengthy. In total I am at page 142 and by my plans that's just a bit over half way down. That aside chapter length is roughly 9-13 pages each and a forum isn't really the best place to drop such a huge amount of text.

So what I'm asking is, if I post say a couple pages (more/less) from the novel would people be interested in giving feedback?

Subject matter is kidnap, Pavlovian conditioning and Stockholm syndrome; there is some abuse and bondage but I am also trying to keep it on the plot as well. I do hope some day for it to be published.

Any interest?

Re: My Novel

Unread postPosted: Tue May 26, 2020 1:33 pm
by d3vious.g3nius
Hey Tesgri, would it be better to keep this semi-private?

You could drop a link/file/text via PMs to readers and then they can send you
feedback via PM's as well.

Also if you are not starting with the first chapter maybe a short description
as to where "we" are in the story before a reader reads the chapter you send?

I would be interested,
- d.g

Re: My Novel

Unread postPosted: Tue May 26, 2020 2:34 pm
by Tesgri
That sounds like it could be a good idea, I'll try to find a decent excerpt I can send your way.

Re: My Novel

Unread postPosted: Tue May 26, 2020 7:20 pm
by rmcingle
Tesigri:

I would be interesting in proof reading your novel!

I have written a lot of BDSM stories myself: most posted for free on various websites, a couple that are being sold on Amazon. I know from my own experience that having an 'editor' would have helped me a lot!

Shoot me a PM if you are interested.

Ron