Olsen Farm Story in Machine Section
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Best story I have read in months, if not years. Great potential! Reads well. Would love more detail and I hope the author keeps the story going for quite awhile!
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Normally I'm not that much into milk stories since they tend to be a bit predictable, but this story includes machine domination(one of my big turn-ons) and is very well written, and you can't predict entirely what happens.Really looking forward to the next chapter.
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Liked the story. Looking forward to more of it. Not my normal kink (modification, etc), but a good read!
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Link to the story is: Olsen's Family Dairy Farm
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Thanks for the comments folks, this was a new field for me I usually write vore stories but this was a commission for a friend that I just loved from the moment I got the first concept of it.Part two will be along, actually i have been contemplating writing two different versions as I cant decide which way id rather take the story (dark and disturbing or very dark and disturbing) thanks again for your comments I really do love to recieve creative feedback so watch this space there will be more.Incubi2011-07-14 15:53:04
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Honestly, I would like to read both versions
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Incubi, Again let me say what a well written story. It is easy to imagine the scenes and the emotions of the victim. So many ways the story could go, whatever path you choose I am certain it will be as good as this first part. Please consider these suggestion as only one person's interest and not even a request for a story line:a breeding scene since the cow needs to be "freshened" so it gives more milka boyfriend comes looking for her and suffers somewhat the same fate except after several forced electo ejaculation sessions his semen is found wanting and he is scheduled for castration and then fattened out as a steer.Thanks, Mike
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I am looking forward to part 2. Great story
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Incubi, Now that Summer is over I hope you will be sharing your next chapter with us. Mike
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its written im just waiting for my proofreader to finish with it *smiles*
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Dear incubi,is it possible to accelerate the proofreader? I`m anxious about the future of Cindy and I've nightmares about livelong imprisonment of her or an end in the slaughterhouse. She is such a good girl. Thanks for a really good part one of the story.
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I'll be posting Part 2 shortly
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[quote="gromet"]I'll be posting Part 2 shortly[/quote]shortly is ok, but I hope without shortening.
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Gromet has part 2, along with 7 parts of another of my stories I thought folks might enjoy, hopefully they should entertain till I finish part three *smiles*
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Thanks for letting us know that it is in Gromet's hands. Not posted yet but I assume it will be later today. Thanks again for a great story, I look forward to reading all of your stories.
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Now online:
Olsen's Family Dairy Farm 2
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Olsen's Family Dairy Farm 2
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Both parts are amazing, mechanical domination has always been a fantasy of mine.
Happily married (but always ready to flirt) wife not into anything kinky so it's self bondage when I can.
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Fantastic story so far incubi! I really hope you plan on finishing it.
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Love this story..
Here's a fixed link.
http://www.grometsplaza.net/world/machi ... yfarm.html
http://www.grometsplaza.net/world/machi ... farm2.html
J.
Here's a fixed link.
http://www.grometsplaza.net/world/machi ... yfarm.html
http://www.grometsplaza.net/world/machi ... farm2.html
J.