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Opening line"Ah, I see your awake, good""You know, the only true freedom is movement, the ability to scratch your nose when needed, to move about or even,,,,escape.""Slowly, I am going to remove all your freedom"

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That could be a complete [mini] story in its self !
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It always starts with a spark doesn't it?! A single thought/idea that transpires into an amazing fantasy, or reality mind you. Run with it fs13, goodluck ;) 

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You could open this up to a group story...Bound Anna has had a few that ran that way for a while before dieing...Then take it at different stages, clean-up and tweak the story, getting rid of inconsistencies, re-posting it as the re-write, and let everyone continue... Short posting by each person, and no double posting.  
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Is he a spook or just a crazy local? Seychelle pulled the sleeping bag a little closer around her neck and looked through the early morning light down the barren, dusty box canyon. He seemed to be alone. She glanced at her backpack, still apparently untouched, three meters away. There was a cannister of pepper spray in the right pocket... and in the center, unfortunately - all of her clothes. Her finger ran over the small chip embedded in the soft tissue of her armpit. Damn! Stall, 'Chelle, stall!

"Is this your land? I'm sorry. I thought I was still on government land. I can leave."

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Stepping between the girl and the bag, he answers, "That depends, how do you plan to leave?"
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