review - Five Nights With Madame Pearl

[feline]

Five Nights With Madame Pearlhttp://www.utopiastories.com/code/show_story.a ... /12618#the short version - go and read this!  really, you should, it is very good right, onto a little more detail.  this is a well written story that slows nicely, drawing the reader in and along.  there is lots of bondage and torment, no waiting around for 20 minutes for something to happen when I first read this story something nagged at me most of the way through, and it took ages to put my paw on it.  at the beginning there is a sense of menace, of a terrible punishment just waiting in the wings for the man's terrible transgression.certainly he is punished and used, but nothing quite seemed to live up to the initial sense of this "above and beyond everything else" punishment.  maybe it was just me, expecting something unrealistic *shrug*putting this, quite frankly minor, point to one side, there is a LOT here to like and admire, the author has done a really good job