review - Just Being Neighbourly

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RE: review - Just Being Neighbourly

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Just Being Neighbourlyhttp://www.utopiastories.com/code/show_story.a ... 12576#this is well written, often sexy, and left me feeling puzzled for quite a bit of the story.  the reactions just did not make sense, well, not for a while at least.i know, that is very cryptic, but i don't want to spoil the story for those who have not read it yet.*considers*we have well drawn characters, lots of bondage...  *shrug* it was the general sense / air of "menace" and kidnap to the story that put me off, since this tone is not one that i generally go for.  still, this IS a good story, and i really loved the ending, especially the last line

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