it turns out it can actually be found here on the forum, if you know where to look. obviously someone posting while i was looking the other way... naughty naughty...

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http://www.grometsplaza.net/boundstories/storieslr/lazy_winter_afternoon.html
first the nit-picking point, a story should have a begining, a middle and an end, but here we simply have a scene, rather than a story.
now that i have said that, this is a VERY good scene! i know nothing about the characters, or why this is happening, or how we got here.
but the story is full of emotion, feeling and passion. it oozes sex and teasing! this makes this very good writing, but going forward, i want to know more about how we came to be here, i want to know more about the characters, and i want to make them wait longer, and beg more, for their sexual release
