On a damn hot summer day

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RE: On a damn hot summer day

Unread postby Guests » Thu Nov 17, 2005 8:01 pm

Just read 'On a Hot Summer Day' by Tiedash. Yeah, it was hot alright! Here in Australia, summer is just around the corner, we don't need stories like this to keep warm! http://fetish.pornparks.com/selfbondage/storieslr/on_hot_sum mers_day.htmlI really liked the simplicity & realism of this story. Some of the fiction I've read gets so complicated you need to take notes! It's great to see writers getting back to basics, so to speak. This story was so real, I could actually see the bound babe writhing around on the floor. The only problem I found was that I couldn't get to sleep afterwards!Let's hear some more from Tiedash- We need more of the KISS principle. 'Keep It Simple Stupid.' Don't forget, writers need feedback- we ain't psychic. tojotojo38673.9940972222
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RE: On a damn hot summer day

Unread postby dodgerfan » Fri Nov 18, 2005 2:04 am

Excellent story well written I enjoyed it
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RE: On a damn hot summer day

Unread postby tiedash » Sat Nov 19, 2005 7:30 am

 Tojo and dodgerfan,Thankyou both  ever so much for you kind comments.*blush*tiedash....
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RE: On a damn hot summer day

Unread postby Darkraptor1 » Sat Nov 19, 2005 9:08 pm

I like this story, especially with the very detailed descriptions of what was going on.  Great work Tiedash!
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RE: On a damn hot summer day

Unread postby tiedash » Mon Nov 21, 2005 4:59 am

Thanks Rap, I appreciate your words of encouragement.tiedash....
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