On a damn hot summer day
RE: On a damn hot summer day
Just read 'On a Hot Summer Day' by Tiedash. Yeah, it was hot alright! Here in Australia, summer is just around the corner, we don't need stories like this to keep warm! http://fetish.pornparks.com/selfbondage ... on_hot_sum mers_day.htmlI really liked the simplicity & realism of this story. Some of the fiction I've read gets so complicated you need to take notes! It's great to see writers getting back to basics, so to speak. This story was so real, I could actually see the bound babe writhing around on the floor. The only problem I found was that I couldn't get to sleep afterwards!Let's hear some more from Tiedash- We need more of the KISS principle. 'Keep It Simple Stupid.' Don't forget, writers need feedback- we ain't psychic. tojotojo38673.9940972222
RE: On a damn hot summer day
Excellent story well written I enjoyed it
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Tojo and dodgerfan,Thankyou both ever so much for you kind comments.*blush*tiedash....
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I like this story, especially with the very detailed descriptions of what was going on. Great work Tiedash!
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Thanks Rap, I appreciate your words of encouragement.tiedash....