Jenni and Sam

[feline]

Jenni and Sam http://fetish.pornparks.com/boundstorie ... /jenni_sam 01.html http://fetish.pornparks.com/boundstorie ... /jenni_sam 02.htmlso far only the first two parts of this story have been posted, but i want to see more of it!!!  now!!! why?  because the author has made very good use of the "flashback" method of story telling, such good use in fact that all we haveare some vague, teasing hints about what is actually happeningnow.  there are enough hints for me to want to know a whole lotmore!turning to part 1 as a whole, i was far to tired when i first readthis, which did not help, but i had quite a bit of trouble followingthe details of the bondage.  there were just so many details, somany scarves, that i lost track of what was going on quite often *sigh*stepping beyond this detail, i found the characters in part 1 wellpresented, interesting, and the general situation to have been wellthought through.  certainly part 1 had enough promise to get meinto part 2 i was awake when i read part 2, and it confirmed my feeling that part 1was unclear on the bondage.  since this time we had a novicelearning and thinking her way through what was going on the bondage waspresented in a FAR more clear cut manor, making it much easier tovisualise, and thus much more interesting.these teasing hints of what is happening in the present are quitefrustrating, but also do a very good job of hinting at how intense thisrelationship is going to become again the characters are well presented and seem well thought through.the one big problem with part 2 is that late in the story it seems tojust repeat earlier events in a big feeling block.  i am not sureif this was deliberate or not, but it seemed out of place to me.hopefully the improvement in clarity will continue in the new parts to come

[Guests]

Well I haven't finished reading the whole two parts yet, but it seems pretty darn good so far. Some good descriptions of the tying & detail about how it feels. Two women too- I like that! (what can I say...)I'll look forward to more parts. Thanks Feline & thanks Kurt.tojo

[JohnH]

feline if you liked that story here are a couple of others written by  the same authourhttp://fetish.pornparks.com/boundstories/storieslr/rainbows_ end.html  it has two parts JohnH38669.2628472222