The Arrangement

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FictitiousSlave
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The Arrangement

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I've been reading one of the mainstream D/s books out there and I've been getting annoyed. These aren't really people! They're all billionaires and hopelessly in love girls.

Anyway here's my spin.

I've deliberately left it very open ended. It'll let me take part two in any direction I want.

So beyond telling me what you think I'd like to know what you think the title should be and where their conversation should take them.

I really hope you enjoy it!

FictitiousSlave
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Re: The Arrangement

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Story removed... Sorry guys, check out my page on utopia stories for loads of others :?
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boundBinder
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Re: The Arrangement

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Let me be the first to say, "please write part two?"

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