Mass Transit - Part Three

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It's all good! Trying to dredge up some criticism, I had a sense that Pts. 2 & 3 seem to have a slightly different 'tone' than Pt.1. Anyone else get that? It's not just the italics either.I'm still trying to put my finger on what it is- it's early & my brain isn't warmed up yet....Great stuff though, I like this story- it pushes all my buttons beautifully. tojo